I’m going to focus back on senses again – too often I concentrate on people and action, but both will be enhanced by sensations such as cold, brightness, ear-piercing sounds.
Thinking again about senses – it doesn’t just have to be what the characters feel, it could be what’s happening which would impact on their senses – rooks and crows cawing, trees shaking and rattling, sunsets. Although this has a first person narrator, with this story maybe more than the others in the Radwinter series allows me to step outside Thomas’s narrative and not necessarily have everything interpreted by him.
Lois Elsden 